17A – Elevator Pitch No. 2
I thought what was surprising was the enthusiasm that I was complimented for int he feedback I received. I feel that after watching the video, I could have been more enthusiastic. Based on that, I feel that I could be more enthusiastic and show more energy, which is what I tried to show in my video.
Hey Akshay,
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job on the elevator pitch. I can see how much more enthusiastic you were and made it so much more powerful. Only thing is it could be a little longer. Yours went for about 50 seconds so you could go another 30 seconds to include a little more about yourself and your product.
Hi,
ReplyDeleteI think you have a really good elevator pitch! You were super enthusiastic and looked like you enjoyed talking about your product, which is important. I think your pitch could've been a little bit longer to fully explain some of the details though. Overall you did a great job and made your product sound interesting!
Hey Akshay,
ReplyDeleteI think your elevator pitch was perfect although a bit short. You entirely cover the main points and I could understand you and your product in 50 seconds which is impressive. Since the assignment required a 90 seconds video i believe you don't need to take anything out for future reference but simply mention a few more details about revenues, expenses and a little bit about how the product work. Overall, that was a great post.
Hey Akshay!
ReplyDeleteI really Thought your elevator pitch was great. However, compared to the other elevator pitches i have seen and done it was rather short. I think that going forward you should just try to explain more about your product and maybe your potential consumer for the product as well. Overall, still well done on your pitch.
Good job on the pitch. Like others said, you could make it a bit longer, but I also think in real life you don't have a specific amount of time required to give a successful pitch. I like what you said about enthusiasm, since being energized and passionate about your idea is going to emulate to whoever you're pitching to.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your elevator pitch. Your enthusiasm was very refreshing and the way you explained your product was very well described. I do think your pitch was a little short but I think it was a good enough pitch were it didn’t need more time. The only thing I would say is that you seemed to be looking down a lot so maybe look at the camera directly.
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